Personally, I would drop the honey malt, flaked oats, carafa and roasted barley. Use Maris Otter for base, add some medium English crystal malt and cut the 10 min. hop addition back some.
OK, how about this? What about the roast barley? I am thinking a little roast flavor may be nice.
I am looking for a black color. This looks to me like it will be more brown. I have some Carafa II special on hand. What about adding some of that or ??
Yeah, I think that looks a lot better! You could even bump the roasted malts in it some more if you wanted too.
I’ve been thumbing through quite a few dark mild recipes lately and for the most part they are very simple recipes.
I’m brewing Bateman’s Dark Mild clone next weekend. It uses 7% black malt and comes in around 22 SRM. Not black, but fairly dark brown.
I can’t comment on the carafa…I’ve never used it, but I think you’re on the right track now.